Ameliorate Bull Run

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There are 6 capitalization errors and 3 missing commas.

After the initial shots of the civil war at fort sumter the first major battle of the conflict occurred on July 21 1861 near a creek called bull run.

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Suggested Answer:
After the initial shots of the Civil War at Fort Sumter, the first major battle of the conflict occurred on July 21, 1861, near a creek called Bull Run.