Ameliorate William Penn

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William Penn the founder of Pennsylvania was an early advocate of religious freedom and good relations with Native Americans under his direction the city of Philadelphia was planned and developed.

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Suggested Answer:
William Penn, the founder of Pennsylvania, was an early advocate of religious freedom and good relations with Native Americans. Under his direction, the city of Philadelphia was planned and developed.