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Showing posts with label School. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Ameliorate the Cotton Gin

Directions: there is one missing comma.

Prior to the introduction of the mechanical cotton gin cotton had required considerable labor to clean and separate the fibers from the seeds. 




Video: Start at 10:04 for Cotton Gin

Suggested answer:
Prior to the introduction of the mechanical cotton gin, cotton had required considerable labor to clean and separate the fibers from the seeds. 

Monday, October 17, 2016

Ameliorate the Battle of Yorktown

Directions: grammatically correct the sentences below, in red.

The Battle of Yorktown ended on October 19 1781 at Yorktown, Virginia it was a decisive victory by a combined force of American Continental Army troops and French Army troops over the British Army.

Video

suggested correct correction:
The Battle of Yorktown ended on October 19, 1781, at Yorktown, Virginia. It was a decisive victory by a combined force of American Continental Army troops and French Army troops over the British Army.

Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Ameliorate Theodore Roosevelt's Foreign Policy

Directions: students should correct the two grammatically incorrect sentences below, in red. There is a misused word and a missing SEMICOLON and a missing  COLON used ( : ) 

president theodore roosevelt was a proponent of imperialism he demonstrated this in too forceful ways building the panama canal and issuing the roosevelt corollary. 








Video #1 of canal transit
VIDEO #2of Panama Canal Transit



ROOSEVELT COROLLARY 



Suggested Answer: 
President Theodore Roosevelt was a proponent of imperialism; he demonstrated this in two forceful ways: building the Panama Canal and issuing the Roosevelt Corollary. 


Thursday, March 20, 2014

Ameliorate the Dawes Act

Directions: correct the following sentences. .

while intended to assimilate Indians into white culture the Dawes Act of 1887 was the culmination of American attempt's two open Indian lands two settlement by non-Indians and two development by railroads. 



Link to ASSIMILATION of INDIANS : Visual RESOURCES 

Suggested Answer:
 While intended to assimilate Indians into white culture, the Dawes Act of 1887 was the culmination of American attempts to open Indian lands to settlement by non-Indians and to development by railroads.