Ameliorate the early Industrial Revolution

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red.

after the war of 1812 the new england states became industrialized while the southern states economy centered on cotton production.

suggested answer:
After the War of 1812, the New England states became industrialized, while the Southern states' economies centered on cotton production.

Ameliorate the Erie Canal

Directions:  Students should grammatically correct the sentence below, in red. The suggested correction is at the bottom of the page.

after the opening of the erie canal in 1825 New york city became the central link between american agriculture and european markets.

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Suggested Answer: 

After the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, New York City became the central link between American agriculture and European markets.