Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Ameliorate Henry Cabot Lodge

Directions: students should ameliorate, or improve, the grammatically incorrect sentence below, in red.
deeply suspicious of any attempt to unnecessarily involve the U.S.A in international political matters following world war one senator henry cabot Lodge campaigned ceaselessly against President Wilsons idea of a league of Nations. 



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suggested Answer: 
Deeply suspicious of any attempt to unnecessarily involve the U.S. A in international political matters following World War One,  Senator Henry Cabot Lodge campaigned ceaselessly against President Wilson's idea of a League of Nations. 


Saturday, March 7, 2015

Ameliorate WW I on the Homefront



Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There are TWO MISSING COMMAS.

In many places because of the war food had doubled in price.




Suggested correction: 
In many places, because of the war, food had doubled in price.


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Thursday, March 5, 2015

Ameliorate Woodrow Wilson in 1916

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. 

in 1916 Woodrow Wilsons reelection efforts championed a slogan that embodied the desire by many to keep the United States out of World War One "He Kept Us Out of War!"



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In 1916, Woodrow Wilson's reelection efforts championed a slogan that embodied the desire by many to keep the United States out of World War One: "He Kept Us Out of War!"