Ameliorate Henry Cabot Lodge

Directions: students should ameliorate, or improve, the grammatically incorrect sentence below, in red. Look for proper nouns, a missing comma, and a missing apostrophe.

following world war one american senator henry cabot Lodge campaigned ceaselessly against President Wilsons idea of a league of Nations. 

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Ameliorate WW I on the Homefront

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There are TWO MISSING COMMAS.

In many places because of the war food had doubled in price.

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In many places, because of the war, food had doubled in price.

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Ameliorate Woodrow Wilson in 1916

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There is a missing comma, a missing apostrophe, and a missing colon (:)

Woodrow Wilsons reelection efforts in 1916 championed a slogan that embodied the desire by many to keep the United States out of World War One "He Kept Us Out of War!"

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