Friday, February 11, 2022

Ameliorate the Mongols

Directions: grammatically correct the sentence below. There are three missing commas.

Genghis Khan proclaimed as the ruler of all Mongols in 1206 helped create the Mongol Empire a vast transcontinental empire that connected the East with the West.  

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Genghis Khan, proclaimed as the ruler of all Mongols in 1206, helped create the Mongol Empire, a vast transcontinental empire that connected the East with the West.  

Thursday, February 10, 2022

Ameliorate Silk Road

Directions: ameliorate the following sentences. There is a missing colon, a missing semi-colon, and a missing comma.

The Silk Road was a major conduit for trade between two powerful empires the Roman Empire and China later the Silk Road linked medieval European kingdoms and China.


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Monday, February 7, 2022

Ameliorate Marco Polo

Directions: grammatically correct the following sentence. There are 4 missing commas and 6 proper nouns that need capitalization.

marco polo an italian merchant explorer and writer travelled through asia along the silk road between 1271 and 1295.