Directions: grammatically improve the two sentences with 4 commas and 1 semicolon (;).
On July 13 1863 riots erupted in NYC to protest the draft the protestors who were mostly Irish immigrants, attacked government officials and Black Americans.
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Suggested Answer:
On July 13, 1863, riots erupted in NYC to protest the draft; the protestors, who were mostly Irish immigrants, attacked government officials and Black Americans.
