Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Ameliorate Rockefeller

Students should ameliorate the error filled sentence below, in red. 

john D rockefeller andrew carnegie and henry ford we're 3 entrepreneurs from american history there contributions were in the oil steel and automobiles industries.

 Entrepreneurs in general
2. Standard Oil Company in court. video

suggested answer:
John D. Rockefeller, Andrew Carnegie, and Henry Ford were three entrepreneurs from American history; their contributions were in the oil, steel, and automobile industries.

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