Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Ameliorate the Holocaust

Directions: students should grammatically correct the following sentence(s), in red. There are two missing commas, misspelled words, and several capitalization errors.

The holocaust was the systematic bureaucratic state-sponsored persecution and murder of approximately six million jews by the nazi regime and it's collaborators.
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Suggested Answer: 
Holocaust was the systematic, bureaucratic, state-sponsored persecution and murder of approximately six million Jews by the Nazi regime and its collaborators.

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