Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Ameliorate The Battle of Bunker Hill

Directions: grammatically correct the sentences below. There are two missing commas and on misused word.

Despite there loss at Bunker Hill the inexperienced  American colonial forces inflicted significant casualties against the British and the battle provided them with an important confidence boost.




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SUGGESTED CORRECTION
Despite their loss at Bunker Hill, the inexperienced  American colonial forces inflicted significant casualties against the British, and the battle provided them with an important confidence boost.

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