Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Ameliorate Jacob Riis

Directions: grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There are 2 sentences and one missing comma.

Jacob Riis wanted to show the the world what he saw to help his readers understand the dangers in immigrant neighborhoods Riis taught himself photography.



correction: 
Jacob Riis wanted to show the world what he saw. To help his readers understand the dangers in immigrant neighborhoods, Riis taught himself photography.

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