Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Ameliorate Jacob Riis

Directions: grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red.

Jacob Riis wanted to literally show the the world what he saw therefore to help his readers truly understand the dehumanizing dangers of the immigrant neighborhoods that he knew all too well Riis taught himself photography and began taking a camera with him on his nightly rounds.



correction: 
Jacob Riis wanted to literally show the the world what he saw. Therefore, to help his readers truly understand the dehumanizing dangers of the immigrant neighborhoods that he knew all too well, Riis taught himself photography and began taking a camera with him on his nightly rounds.

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