Thursday, May 26, 2016

Ameliorate Somalia in 1993

Directions: grammatically correct the two sentences below. There is a missing comma and a missing period.

What started out as a humanitarian mission to combat famine in Somalia grew into a bloody military struggle with the bodies of dead American soldiers dragged through the streets of the Somalian capital of Mogadishu in 1993 the movie "Black Hawk Down" documented this event.



SUggested Correction

What started out as a humanitarian mission to combat famine in Somalia grew into a bloody military struggle, with the bodies of dead American soldiers dragged through the streets of the Somalian capital of Mogadishu in 1993. The movie "Black Hawk Down" documented this event.

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