Tuesday, April 16, 2019

Ameliorate Iwo Jima

Directions: grammatically correct the sentences, below; there is missing semicolon and other needed corrections. 

The Battle of iwo jima was fought in 1945 and lasted five weeks it was a significant victory against the japanese. 



Overview of fighting Japanese during WW 2

Suggested Correction:
The Battle of Iwo Jima was fought in 1945 and lasted five weeks; it was a significant victory against the Japanese. 


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