Ameliorate Bull Run

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. 



After the initial shots of the civil war at fort sumter the first major battle of the conflict occurred on July 21 1861 near a creek called bull run.

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Suggested Answer:
After the initial shots of the Civil War at Fort Sumter, the first major battle of the conflict occurred on July 21, 1861, near a creek called Bull Run.