Ameliorate the Emancipation Proclamation

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentences below, in red. There is a missing semicolon and three missing commas, along with many proper nouns that need capitalization. 

On January 1 1863 abraham lincoln issues the emancipation proclamation that free slaves in the south it did not end slavery itself and it did not make former slaves citizens.

video: very KID friendly

On January 1, 1863, Abraham Lincoln issued the Emancipation Proclamation that freed in the South; it did not end slavery itself, and it did not make former slaves citizens.