Thursday, October 10, 2013

Ameliorate the Emancipation Proclamation

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentences below, in red. There is a missing semicolon and three missing commas, along with many proper nouns that need capitalization

On January 1 1863 abraham lincoln issues the emancipation proclamation that free slaves in only the states of rebellion during the Civil War it did not end slavery itself and it did not make former slaves citizens.



On January 1, 1863, Abraham Lincoln issued the Emancipation Proclamation that freed slaves in  only states of rebellion during the Civil War; it did not end slavery itself, and it did not make former slaves citizens

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