Thursday, March 21, 2013

Buffalo Amelioration


Students should ameliorate the sentence below, in red.

Buffalo hunting was an activity fundamental two the planes indian tribes' of the united states which was lader adopted by american professional hunters leading to the near-extinction of the speeces in the late 1800s.  













Suggested answer: 
Buffalo hunting was an activity fundamental to the Plains Indian tribes of the United States, which was later adopted by American professional hunters, leading to the near-extinction of the species in the late 1800s. 

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