Tuesday, March 26, 2013

SHARE the WEALTH ! ! ! !

Directions: students should ameliorate the two sentences below, in red.

Andrew Carnegie was a wealthy entrepreneur when he retired from business in 1901 he set about in earnest to distribute his fortune



Suggested Answer: 
Andrew Carnegie was a wealthy entrepreneur. When he retired from business in 1901, he set about in earnest to distribute his fortune.

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